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Submitted: October 28, 2012
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Lonely Witchby ~changruth101

Manga & Anime / Traditional Media / Drawings

Being away from the computer does have its good points.

Critique by ~NobodybutAnybody Jan 6, 2013, 1:18:47 AM

Original and good. It feels as if you seemed to lack in the idea of what her role was in being here. You simply placed her infront of a window, no story at all. To help present that this girl has a story, you should consider changing her hairstyle and clothes to suit what you want to reflect. I understand the title is called lonely witch but I don't see a witch here. The tone is to nice to be lonely and her clothes aren't very witch like. Overall, I love how much detail you put into this picture. You shaded it nicely and I loved how you made the wood on the floor fade out. You could have gone into more detail in the background of the window. Maybe a desert to present more lonliness. Also, I get the impression that she is smiling. Maybe she is happy alone? If you wanted to go for more of her being happy that she is alone, then you have done this perfectly.

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~CubizSparkle32 Jun 2, 2013 Hobbyist Digital Artist

Really epic!

~changruth101 Jun 2, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

thanks!

~CubizSparkle32 Jun 2, 2013 Hobbyist Digital Artist

no problem

*Lady-Suchiko Apr 20, 2013 Hobbyist Digital Artist

I really do love how you used the curtains to frame a kind of 'window' into another world. It reminds me of the many types of magical and fantasy themed artworks I used to enjoy in my childhood.

~changruth101 Apr 21, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

thank u! ✩∨✩

~Knives509 Apr 5, 2013 Student Traditional Artist

aaw she adorable

~changruth101 Apr 6, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

thanks!

~ChesireJunk Mar 26, 2013 Student Digital Artist

wows really sweet and nice concept. is this done by pen/pencil?

~changruth101 Mar 27, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

thanks! it's done by pen

~vicsan32090 Feb 12, 2013 Student Digital Artist

wow,nice! i like the details

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